In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Jobs become crucial factor in the development of a countries economy, therefore forcing laws in the recruitment will have detrimental effects. Some countries have implemented laws to protect the discrimination of recruitment based on age. I think this might lead to negative impact though it secures the jobs for senior people. This essay will explain the reasons behind the effects.
There is legislation to prohibit the rejection of job application based on age discrimination in some countries. Firstly, as there are limitation that arises with increasing age in ones physical and mental ability, assigning a job to such person becomes highly questionable to an employer. Job demands are based on the skill requirement if so then promising employment for sake of a law requirement compromises employer's stake.
Secondly, some works mainly requires senior people or only young people, such managing complex petrochemical plants needs a veteran or seasoned person while field work force requires young active people. In the latest journal published on Science Direct states that government regulation on skill force had created back lash in economy in the such countries in past 5years. But it has paved a way to keep the senior people in work force facilitating 23% share of the economy.
To conclude, in spite of economic benefit showered upon senior citizens there is negative impact for the employer to run the institution in terms of productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... crucial factor in the development of a countries economy, therefore forcing laws in the ...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tion that arises with increasing age in ones physical and mental ability, assigning ...
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Line 9, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in economy in the such countries in past 5years. But it has paved a way to keep t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35930735931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93855543383 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.672111395 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190362018013 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763708504407 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594671999863 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109160090792 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730159016397 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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