Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Crime seems to be increasing likely with young people in most parts of the world. There may be several reasons to this but the probable solutions mostly linked with the part played by the governance and moral awareness of the young society. I will explain 3 major reasons and possible solutions in this essay.
Crime tends to evolve as inevitable part in today's society. Primarily there may be a lack in the governance system and structure to educate people on the ill effects of committing violence. Moreover, the law and the morality of the existence or requirement of the constitution are not properly communicated to the people, also it appears to be governments has no interest in setting up any such mechanism to portray to its citizens. Secondarily, the media content that is easily available to the young minds, who are mostly not matured enough to process such graphics with conscience and right judgement have been observed to be possible reason. For example violence scenes in the movies are probable source of influences to justify violence. Lastly, the unequal economy tend to be a root for the development of stress and frustration which in many cases have led to crime. For instance the students come form rural area to a university have shown conflicting minds with the ways of life in a city.
Crime might have increased in the world mostly with youngsters. This can be reduced if the governance system was designed to educate people with morality and the benefits of inclining towards judiciary, crime would have faded. Such a case is shown in the Netherlands where crime is very low for many years. Another major remedy could be schools containing judiciary as a subject and engage students practising the court proceedings with various scenarios. Moreover, the pain of the victim should be shown to the masses in various media therefore imparting sympathy in minds, which may help a person to reduce ones aggravated reaction to conflicting situations.
Therefore, with the above solutions the likelihood of changing the minds of people towards the better path appears to be a promising and possible to reduce crime.
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... minds with the ways of life in a city. Crime might have increased in the world ...
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...promising and possible to reduce crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01404494382 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72883825093 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4193425516 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253712953144 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896898634666 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615705501533 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180519711659 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484867586172 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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