In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, the issue of the numerous graduates and people having work choosing living with their families have garnered a great deal of publicity. While this tendency may indeed have some potential drawbacks, they are eclipsed by the substantial benefits offered to.
On the one hand, these young adults who live on their own are more likely to have a chance to develop themselves rather than with their parents. It is clear that those who remain at home are usually exempt from mundane tasks such as preparing meals, washing dishes or tidying their room, resulting in trouble enhancing the capacity of self-reliance. Moreover, in some cases, a plethora of parents invariably interfere in the whole matter of their offspring’s life, leading to these adults would have a little room for personal growth and skills like financial management or problem solving would be diminished. Consequently, these failures have detrimental effects on these young adults’ future, clearly getting into troubles occur, they may find the transition rather challenging.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the aforementioned merits pale in comparison with the significance of living with the family. The most obvious pros of this trend is that this helps cement relationships between members of the family. In fact, there is a flurry of opportunities for regular face-to-face interactions, intimate conversations or taking care of each person, contributing to forging stronger bonds. Prime example, on a daily basis, these young adults get a handful of advice or confide setbacks or problems at work to their parents and can care for their health when being ill. It is clear that if these adults settle down in a new home with a flexible timetable, surely these members of families can only speak with each other on occasion over the phone. Another compelling point is that staying under the same roof, these adults can support the parents, who may be tackling financially to meet their living expenses. There is no point in denying that these workers can save their economy’s families the troubles of monthly house rents and other living costs such as water, electricity bills.
In conclusion, while continuing to live with parents may entail certain negatives, I would spine that pros occurring from this tendency are far weightier.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...aduates and people having work choosing living with their families have garnered a gre...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefits offered to. On the one hand, these young adults who live on their own...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... parents may entail certain negatives, I would spine that pros occurring from thi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21542553191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73718540902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8906962443 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.071428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216677377853 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779723725235 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540093688716 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138283981641 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299471853262 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...aduates and people having work choosing living with their families have garnered a gre...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefits offered to. On the one hand, these young adults who live on their own...
^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... parents may entail certain negatives, I would spine that pros occurring from thi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21542553191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73718540902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8906962443 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.071428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216677377853 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779723725235 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540093688716 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138283981641 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299471853262 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.