These days in some countries people would rather rent a house instead of buying their own. This is because of exponentially high property rates which is not everyone's cup of tea. Whereas another school of thought opine that buying a house is an asset and prefer it over renting. Although, owning a house has it's own benefits, renting is far more advantageous and this essay shall analyze the same.
To begin with, these days property prices are sky rocketing, particularly in urban areas, and thus not everyone can afford to own their personal apartment. Renting makes it possible for people, who come from villages and small towns, to live comfortably in cities. Secondly, even though plethora of people consider buying a house as a long-term investment, there is no guarantee that it may appreciate in the future. These days it is not uncommon to see flats in prime locations being undervalued because there are not buyers. For example, many are compelled to sell their houses at a loss due to the acute shortage of people willing to invest in real estate.
On the other hand there is no dearth of people who are looking to rent a house. Renting gives the person flexibility to move in case they are unhappy with their accommodation. On the other hand, once you own a house, the freedom to change is curtailed. Likewise, although the older generation believed buying a house gives you stability, the younger generation opt for renting as it is a comparatively cheaper option. Therefore, nowadays many home owners for instance are giving their houses for rent instead of selling them. Consequently resulting in a continuous income in the form of rent.
To recapitulate, even though a small segment of people still prefer to buy their own house, this trend is dramatically witnessing a change as more and more people prefer to rent a house for accommodation. It is more appealing to the youngsters as it is pocket friendly and does not restricted the possibility of change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...alyze the same. To begin with, these days property prices are sky rocketing, part...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ouses for rent instead of selling them. Consequently resulting in a continuous income in the...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'restrict'
Suggestion: restrict
...s as it is pocket friendly and does not restricted the possibility of change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, likewise, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90178571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76078686069 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1039977416 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534845152624 0.244688304435 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152506947444 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126051702727 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338815397482 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905785794456 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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