In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have
limited access to out-of town stores, and this may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In some countries, more and more people are shopping in large shops outside of town, which makes local ones have faced closure. Following that, other people have to buy cars so that they can continue their shopping activities, leading to an increasing number of car use. Although this issue has several benefits, I believe that the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, shopping in large stores outside in the town can have many advantages. First, this helps businesses outside the city earn more profits and create more job opportunities for people, which positively impacts on national development. Second, the new shopping habit will partially change the infrastructure as the government have to invest more budget in widening roads to serve a large number of commuters between inside and outside a town. As a result, the tendency of migrating to cities would reduce, which prevents the population explosion in the metropolis.
On the other hand, I believe the disadvantages of the issue are more influential than advantages. The first problem is that when people flock to supermarkets in neighbouring cities, businesses in the inner area have to shut down due to revenue loss. As a consequence, mass unemployment happens, leading to an increasing level of poverty and crime. Another drawback is that the growth of travelling by car will cause air pollution with a large amount of carbon dioxide emitted into the atmosphere. This will lead to greenhouse effects and destroy the ozone layers, causing global warming and climate change.
In conclusion, although using cars to shop out-of-town stores have some benefits, I still believe that the negatives are outweighed by the upwards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... more budget in widening roads to serve a large number of commuters between inside and outside a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, still, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21299638989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84170793573 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2839637919 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309581768763 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995529642993 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918878053052 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203788916448 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893224181735 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.