In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study, whereas in other countries students attend University in another city. Do you think the benefits of living far away from home during the university outweigh the disadvantages?
Education lays the foundation for a person's success and progress. Despite many arguing that students should stay with their families while they study, others tend to claim that there are multiple benefits for students to stay away from families while they study. I strongly believe that students should live in another city during the university days for overall development and progress. With the course of this essay, I will discuss both the viewpoints with some examples.
Firstly, students tend to stay at parental houses while they are at the university since it is cost effective. Moreover, they can save a lot of money by staying at home rather than renting the apartment. The recent survey carried out by the University of California found that 60% of students like to stay at home while they study since it helps them to focus more on studies and to avoid any external distraction. Secondly, students can help their parents in daily household works. This way, they can contribute towards family as well. Although, staying home can provide better food and living standard. However, sometimes it is difficult to concentrate on studies due to family nuisance.
On the other hand, nowadays, many students prefer staying in a different city. Studying and living far from home help students for their overall growth and development. They have better exposure to the world. Scholars living in different cities learn to live independently and earn at the early stage of their lives. Students can concentrate more on the studies and research works. As per the latest report published by the University of Arizona showed that students who stay in university campus are more active in research activities that the students staying with parents.
To conclude, certainly, there can be disadvantages of living away from family, but there are more advantages in the longer run. Living away from home can help students to become mature and provide students strength to overcome any difficulties in life. In my opinion, staying away from home surely helps students in the future.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Education lays the foundation for a persons success and progress. Despite many argu...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...more on the studies and research works. As per the latest report published by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13864306785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57133416392 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507374631268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1057055992 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43618791127 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128647926795 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785796365899 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283094561192 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409229634434 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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