Some feel that the effect of advertising are positive for individuals and business, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that advertisements are advantageous to people and organisations. However, others maintain that they leave a negative impact on them. This essay will intend to analyse both the views along with my perspective.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits of advertisements to people as well as business. The prominent one is the advertisements form a source of information for people. In other words, when a new product comes into the market, people come to know about its importance through adverts. For example, a survey was conducted by the UK government in 2016 found that around 60% of companies sales were reached at top position after telecasting their products via adverts. This evidence proves that advertisements have more constructive effect on people and business.
On the other hand, the advertisements could have a negative impact on people by attracting them to buy the things which actually they do not need. To explicate it, organisations exaggerate the positive sides of their products and people fall for their market tricks and strategies. In this way, people waste a vast amount of money on unnecessary things, which they can use in more effective way. Moreover, by watching adverts, youngsters pressurize their parents to purchase unwanted things, which also weakens family bounding. Hence, it is quite clear that adverts has deleterious impacts on people's lives.
In conclusion, although adverts lure human beings to buy those materials which are not useful for them. Yet, I believe that advertisements provide information regarding newly lauched products to individuals which results in benefits for both consumers and manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97232413169 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 264.0 20.2975951904 1301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1392.0 106.682146367 1305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 264.0 20.7667163134 1271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 136.0 7.06120827912 1926% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19301053123 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19301053123 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119922377382 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101029611288 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 135.4 13.0946893788 1034% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -204.94 50.2224549098 -408% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.4 11.3001002004 950% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.77 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.68 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 107.6 10.1190380762 1063% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 108.0 10.7795591182 1002% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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