Some people say that government should not install CCTV cameras at public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
CCTV cameras have become common place in modern society. It is argued that video surveillance should not be installed at common places. I disagree with this notion. Further, this essay will discuss the view points.
Firstly, video surveillance provides security. By installing cameras in strategic locations in area of operation, it enhances security. For example, unattended stuff or stranger in an area, police can clear the area, before any damage occurs. As well as they can monitor the most busy places, because these places are always first target of criminals. Moreover, cameras are used to remote real time road traffic, and record the vehicles and people, who break the traffic rules such as crossing red lights, and hiting other vehicles.
Secondly, cameras placed at public places helps to prevent crimes and deter criminals, if the place is under security a criminal will think before execute their operation. For instance, shoplifters or thieves wears mask it is difficult to caught them, but enforcement agencies can use the video footage to approached and prosecute criminals. These cameras helps to put law offenders behind the bars, and provides justice to innocent people.
Apparently, cameras are replacing job of security guards. For instance, few years ago at every public place had a person for security but invention of video cameras making impact on these jobs. Also, institutions and companies give preference to video surveillence rather than guards for their benefit.
In conclusion, CCTV cameras should not remove from public places since provides invaluable service to society by preventing crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43921568627 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60418141864 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8707423092 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209172382887 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673841891916 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649068543786 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128894189409 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492451863591 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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