Some parents believe that child should not waste time by reading entertainment books but instead they should spend time to read educational books only. What is you opinion about this?

Parenting has undoubtedly become a monumental task with the advent of entertainment in books. Nowadays, a growing number of parents, completely refrain their children from reading entertainment books and insist only on academic books. The subject continues to be a matter of debate from a long time, which we will discuss here.

Over the centuries, educational books aid learning process of children.They offer an exceptional quality of knowledge, as those books are being developed by pedagogical experts. Academic books primarily target on enhancing the subject knowledge of students by sifting information and delivering facts. For instance, academic books assist children to gain familiarity on specific subjects, which could potentially marshal them to decide on the career they are most interested in, in the future.Likewise, parents siding this argument opine that, entertainment books could mislead their pupils, which potentially would lead them to indulge in delinquency.

On the other hand, when it comes to creative thinking and socializing, entertainment books perform a critical role. Comics, novels and magazines enormously encourage a child to develop life skills.On top of that, literary and self-help books extensively nourish children's character and usher them to behave sensibly in the society. Not to mention, the innovative and unique ideologies developed in wards' minds feeds water to nurture their professional career, provided they are under the supervision of their parents.

In conclusion, while it is no denying that academic books are crucial for children's knowledge, social and soft skills can be sown into their minds only through entertainment books, provided, they offer valuable information and not just leisure materials.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74045801527 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04894708336 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2712106803 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203119672496 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767337894703 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336775205415 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115180309688 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382618446103 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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