Some people believe that big cities should make the transportation system free. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Several people believe that public transportation must be provided without any charges in urban cities. However, despite the positive aspects of this amenity, there are some drawbacks. Both of the rides will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs assuring the privilege of having a free transport system.
On the one hand, people who are using their own cars will leave them because the public means of transportations are free. As a result, people will save more money. If people abandon their cars, there will be fewer traffic jams and more parking slots. The government's main concern is the environment, so they will encourage that approach as it will improve the environment and the people's health. The cities will decrease enormous amounts of carbon dioxide and harmful gases leading to dangerous diseases like cancer.
On the other hand, since the government will embrace the direction of free transport, it will lead to congestion in the means of transport as new riders will be joining the system. For that, they have to increase their capacity and get new means such as buses and trains. In addition to that, when the average usage of transport will increase theSeveral people believe that public transportation must be provided without any charges in urban cities. However, despite the positive aspects of this amenity, there are some drawbacks. Both of the rides will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs assuring the privilege of having a free transport system.
On the one hand, people who are using their own cars will leave them because the public means of transportations are free. As a result, people will save more money. If people abandon their cars, there will be fewer traffic jams and more parking slots. The government's main concern is the environment, so they will encourage that approach as it will improve the environment and the people's health. The cities will decrease enormous amounts of carbon dioxide and harmful gases leading to dangerous diseases like cancer.
On the other hand, since the government will embrace the direction of free transport, it will lead to congestion in the means of transport as new riders will be joining the system. For that, they have to increase their capacity and get new means such as buses and trains. In addition to that, when the average usage of transport will increase the maintenance expenses will combine and do the same. Despite the transportation is supported by the government it is still considered as a source of income which will be lost.
In conclusion, even though many people suggest to keep metropolitan transportation to facilitate the journeys for city dwellers, it will help the environment which is the major advantage against several drawbacks of this suggestion. maintenance expenses will combine and do the same. Despite the transportation is supported by the government it is still considered as a source of income which will be lost.
In conclusion, even though many people suggest to keep metropolitan transportation to facilitate the journeys for city dwellers, it will help the environment which is the major advantage against several drawbacks of this suggestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'less traffic'?
Suggestion: less traffic
...eople abandon their cars, there will be fewer traffic jams and more parking slots. The govern...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...it will improve the environment and the peoples health. The cities will decrease enormo...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'less traffic'?
Suggestion: less traffic
...eople abandon their cars, there will be fewer traffic jams and more parking slots. The govern...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...it will improve the environment and the peoples health. The cities will decrease enormo...
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Line 10, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Maintenance
...t several drawbacks of this suggestion. maintenance expenses will combine and do the same. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 7.85571142285 382% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2666.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 515.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17669902913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80817518418 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.293203883495 0.561755894193 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7230580991 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8076923077 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189908793752 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715846561302 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414919686486 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129805566826 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313087686032 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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