Some people believe that children should be involved in educational activities in their spare time. Others think it puts too much pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by some people that children should participate in scholastic activities in their free time, whereas it is argued by others that this will make children tense. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the last view as youngsters should not spend their childhood in tension.
On the one hand, many think that children have to go through educational exercises in their waste time. In other words, some parents force their sons to take part in these activities because they think that this will make their career future better. However, this approach will not let them develop their soft skills as their whole life is education and they do not have time to deal with people and develop soft skills. For example, a study elucidates that workers who were involved in educational activities in their childhood have many issues in soft skills and need to improve them.
On the other hand, some believe that children should not participate in scholastic activities because this will make them very stressed. To put in another way, youngsters must do something useful in their spare time like doing the hobby they like to discover new talents they would have. If their day includes 8 hours of school and then an educational activity, they will not have time for doing a hobby or even having fun while playing. For instance, a statistic found that 80% of children who are participating in educational activities feel very stressed. Therefore scholastic exercises would be harmful to their psychological health.
To conclude, undoubtedly, education exercises make a very tense environment for the children as they will always have quizzes and tests and this will not let them have a creative and peaceful mind. That is why I completely agree with this view.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97966101695 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5742543399 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3049030156 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304045253765 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122950469635 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07089713743 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20361377007 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866253537984 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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