Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is widely held belief that extreme sports ought to be prohibited but there is strong counter argument amongst the sections of people that it should be encouraged.however, I am the opinion that this a matter to debated in the light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.
The first and foremost reason is that an individual life is extremely important and such dangerous sports could be the cause of deaths of significant number of people all around the world . Sports such as river rafting, bungee jumping, sky diving and scuba diving are extremely risky. A recent survey carried out by an eminent socialist Dr.Richard from Stanford University has found that in California, there are approximately 4% of people per year who are having severe injuries or even death due to participation in such life threatening games.
The second worth mentioning point here is that these activities are very expensive to perform. This is because,such sports requires a lot of costly equipment and training courses for trainers and proper certification from the respected authorities.Some people are not. Able to pay such huge amount of money to enjoy the momentary thrills, so try to imitate them without the guidance of skilled professionals. As a result, they risks their lives for the sake fun.
On the other hand, there are a certain group of people who vehemently contend that such recreational activities should be promoted because it will strengthen their innerself.Moreover, it will also boosts their courage. Apart from this, such thrilling activities has given golden opportunities to numerous number of people through emoployment.If it would be banned ,it will be hard to such people to earn their livings.
After analysing both the views, I am of the opinion that such creative activities should be allowed to public with extensive training and under the guidance of skilled professionals taken into consideration about the safety measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, apart from, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26031746032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06636751842 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8721316352 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179898619958 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063594089677 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039153320965 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957655045648 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234280858005 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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