Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced the sociable behavior,but other think that it has reduced social interaction.discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a widely held belief that technological innovations have made people more social but, there is a strong counter-argument amongst sections of the people that it has lessened the face to face interactions. however, I am of the opinion that this is a matter to be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be reached.
The first and foremost reason is that online platforms like Twitter, Facebook, snap chat proved the fact that there are no geographical constraints. In other words, people residing at any corner of the world can frequently contact with their relatives through social websites. Eventually, it fosters the sense of community and strengthens the fabric of relations among the family members. To illustrate, a recent survey carried out by an eminent socialist Dr. Robert fuller at the University of California, San Francisco has revealed that there is a dramatic change seen in the social index in Tokyo, Japan in the last couple of years due to advent of modern-day social platforms.
The second worth-mentioning point here is that today's technology has shrunk the planet into a small global village by covering the thousands of kilometers in a fraction of minutes through high-tech aircraft and bullet trains. To be more specific, there is no shadow of a doubt that in the prevailing era, it is quite convenient even for a common man to travel due to advanced modes of transportations. Obviously, the interaction between the individuals will increase a lot as a result of it.
On the contrary, there are certain groups of people who vehemently contend that due to technology the real or in-person meetings have descended. It is a true fact that nowadays the children, as well as adults, are too much engrossed in sophisticated gadgets. these high tech equipments offer a wide variety of entertainment options to young ones which are quite interesting and easy to use. the real-time video games are designed by skilled professionals to grab the attention of the teenager group people.hence, children automatically tend to indulge in modern day devices rather than playing sports in the playground with the peer group.besides this, technology has provided us a significant number of websites through which one can buy as well as sell daily routine or household commodities through online payment method while sitting at home which decreases personal meeting of a seller and buyer.
After analysing both the views, I am of the opinion that present day technology has given a platform to stay in touch with loved ones and at the same time it has taken out real time interaction from the equation.
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| 2019-09-20 | Ramanpreet kaur Hans | 95 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, while, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08009153318 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98996150842 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594965675057 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.026684175 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.571428571 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2142857143 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121534002862 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351160996377 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396025812057 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645597526151 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034073352502 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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