Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Having choices in life is an essential requirement as it gives an individual a sense of freedom to choose and decide as per their liking. In todays day and age we have been presented with multiple alternatives for anything and everything that we seek. I completely agree with the fact that in current scenario we are not limited with only a handful of options for our requirements.
With the invention of internet there is an increase in access to global education and our world has become virtually smaller and easier to reach. These days one can reach to any corner of the world through their computers and World Wide Web services. Consequently this also introduces them to knowledge and industry of that place which allows them to take advantage of it from a distance. For example a person from a developing country like Africa could order some medicine online from United States and receive excellent medical treatment from their home country. Hence it is clear that advent of internet has opened wide doors of options for us.
Furthermore, these plethora of alternatives has increased as a response to consumer demands and a common psyche that ‘variety is the spice of life’. Consumer driven industry say for example cosmetics and health foods in particular seems to offer various ways in which a demand could be addressed(satisfied) and this in combination with years of well experimented marketing strategies results in increasing availability of similar products. According a research conducted by students of Business program in 2010, more than 70% of American buyers prefer brands and shopping malls that provides them with many options to select from, as this feeds in to their belief of having power the choose. In short, now we have plenty of ways to select and shop owing to increasing consumerism.
This essay discussed how we have far more alternatives for every aspects in our life compared to in the past, due to rise in internet usage, globalization and effective marketing strategies. These options available to us not only works in our favour when, it comes to price point but also gives us near to customized (tailored) requirement. In my opinion I especially believe that choices increased in response to our ever increasing global reach and diverse needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...d everything that we seek. I completely agree with the fact that in current scenario we are not limited ...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... computers and World Wide Web services. Consequently this also introduces them to knowledge ...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ical treatment from their home country. Hence it is clear that advent of internet has...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this plethora' or 'these plethoras'?
Suggestion: this plethora; these plethoras
...doors of options for us. Furthermore, these plethora of alternatives has increased as a resp...
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Line 4, column 689, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eeds in to their belief of having power the choose. In short, now we have plenty of ways t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, in particular, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05013192612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86125342927 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7444974404 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141647272433 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470255547252 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444683962035 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887346977013 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454908575058 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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