Some people believe that studying history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it is useless and should not be studied at all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few people opine that learning about history does not have any significant value to anyone in this virtual world. While others argue that gaining knowledge about history can help one understand our present better. However, I believe that one should know about their country and cultural history to certain extent so that they can understand their present.
Many choose to study science related subject because they have better job prospect compared to history. Today many youngsters spend more time to get top grades in order to get admission in reputed college. For example, in my country all schools and universities conduct exams only on subjects related to STEM because they help students fetch lucrative jobs. Hence, history is given least importance. Also, many do not want to waste their time on learning about past as it cannot change anything in the present or future.
On the flip side, some argue that learning history is very important because it teaches about human evolution and how far humans have come. Also, it is important that young generation learn about their cultural history so that they can pass it on to next generation. Thisway tradition can evade from extinction. In fact, many languages and traditions are in the verge of disappearance because many do not know their history. For example, in my country few decades ago, there were 500 communities but now there are only 287 communities.
In conclusion, it is enough to know about history to some extent. But one should spend time on learning about subjects that can elevate one’s standard of living
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44334295833 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6602800577 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130392399313 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044409369636 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036402098057 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807048024502 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300354506923 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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