Some people feel that children are over protected nowadays.They say this leads to
negative consequqnse.
what is your opinion.
A portion of populace vocalize that children are being more protected by guardians in the contemporary era.Even though escalation in this vogue ensure the security of children, still I cogitate that the adverse repercusions of this trend cannot be overlooked as it impedes the social interaction of children with their peers and erodes the decision making abilities.
Since the parents become skeptical about the secuirty of their offsprings , thus they force them to stay at home and do not let them to mingle up with others.Consequently, lack of social interaction with outer world turn the children less socialistic person and trim their comunication traits and the privation of the social skills pave the path of fragile career options.Also,it is biased to over look the facts published by Amercian Children Welfare Council that owing to unnecessary restrictions on children in their formative age would turn them into ideosyncratic personality.
To continue,every time considering children as nerds would undermine their confidence and it would become the halt among children while taking any decisions.Seemingly, guardians always believe that their children are immature and indecisive by nature ,thus they start taking decisions on their behalf which detoriate their decision making competencies. To exemplify, as per survey conducted in the gone calendar year by 'The New York Times' ,excessive predominance of parents would become a halt in the path of holistic progress of children in the U.S.A.Therefore, undue protection would devastate the life of children in long run.
In conclusion, although restriction endow protection to children,it gives birth of less interactive behaviour and restrain the free flow of decision making capabilities among children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62313432836 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28019679193 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.027875844 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.4 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140742595341 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084403650772 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021332041523 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930123822361 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195297850328 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.0946893788 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.