Some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
It is commonly believed that entertainment plays a fundamental role in society as stars entertain millions of people. However, whether stars should be paid huge salaries has caused heated debate. In my view, I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.
First, it is clear that stars earn too much money even though they do not provide a vital service. Football players, for example, earn enormous salaries by simply kicking a ball, compared with teachers, who are never listed among the best-paid professionals, yet they are more important to our future. We could live happily without professional football or stars of film. Therefore, it is not necessary for stars of film, sport or music to get paid higher than other jobs.
Those who object to this opinion may claim that stars have dedicated hours of practice to developing their fitness and skills, so it is fair that they should earn a lot of money. However, perhaps this is true, but other vital professionals, including doctors and engineers, also devote their time to studying and doing much research. That is to say, stars salaries should be compatible with the wages other professionals earn.
Unfortunately, professionals from other fields, who make a significant contribution to human society, are paid so much less. Society does not seem to value professions like doctors, engineers and other vital professionals as highly as professional sport.
In conclusion, stars play some roles in entertainment; nevertheless, I put forward the view that their salaries are unjustifiable. Doctors and engineers are more beneficial than stars; therefore, equally payment to these professionals can guarantee the harmonious development of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my view, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30685920578 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00996879691 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2216883232 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219570510961 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771225237618 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479688190575 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115000184237 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532106519478 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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