Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
In this modern society, people like to feed a pet to cover there lonely. However, they do not care properly and cause many problems after all. As a reason, some people think they should not feed the pet if there are bein responsibility. In this essay, I will make a reasonable conclusion after all.
At a begin, I am a pet person. I feel pet can hell humans mantel, even can hell human sadness. In many academic research, dog and cat person are happier the one who does not have a pet. The dog and cat or any of pet can hell humans mind even make them more happy for there life.
In the other hand, people how did have a pet but not really care them it is actually causing many problems. In addition, pet live in uncare conditions is affected environment. even make both of them not happy.
In conclusion, people who want to kept the pet should consider every supply you are ready or not. Otherwise, it will influence your life and pet health. ready for everything that we want to do before disside are very important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much academic research', 'a good deal of academic research'.
Suggestion: much academic research; a good deal of academic research
...mantel, even can hell human sadness. In many academic research, dog and cat person are happier the one...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...are conditions is affected environment. even make both of them not happy. In c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ready
...ill influence your life and pet health. ready for everything that we want to do befor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, after all, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44210526316 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36762559741 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1382483683 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2857142857 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302446830267 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100054830999 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620684309597 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173116693193 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403728365672 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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