Owning to the fact that some people from poor and rural areas find it hard to get a university education, universities should make it simple for them to gain admission. However, I partially agree and disagree tetiary institutions should make getting into them stress-free.
On the one hand, when the process of getting into the university is simplified for individuals from poor backgrounds, it will enable them produce men and women who can bring a bright future to the region. The free education agenda that took place in Imo State from 2011 to 2019 helped the lower class, and it has produced great personalities like George Frank. Similarly, the scholarship granted by some tetiary institutions has raised some good names from rural areas. Clearly, if universities make admission easy for the poor and rural communities, then it will help them raise some future leaders.
On the other hand, other groups of people believe it is impartial to make admission into universities easier for some individuals. The reason is that these individuals feel cheated, and they think the best thing to do is for everyone to have equal chances to getting into tetiary institutions. In Unizik, for instance, there was a protest by the students back in 2006, and they demanded that the low-class, middle-class, and high-class should be treated equally regarding admission into the school. Therefore, admitting some group of people easily, and giving them preferential treatment s will make other feel left-out.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how making admission easy for the poor will raise future commanders from that area, but will make other group of people feel they are not being carried along. In other words, this is the extent to which I partially agree and disagree on the matter.
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- You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence In your letter Tell your manager what event it was Say how important the event was State the reasons for your absence 73
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11604095563 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73664808482 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1997673059 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428454008149 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161110542789 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935839341379 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270175911767 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965872211296 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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