There is difference in opinion of many when it comes to planning of their leisure time; some say it should be well planned, while others prefer not to have any priority. In my opinion, we should not schedule any activities in our free time.
On the one hand, it is preferred by many to draw out detailed activity plan of their empty time. This is because these people believe in time management and like to utilize available time to its maximum extent, so that they can feel satisfied at the end of the day. By doing this it is often seen such people dedicate this time to personal pursuits such as, drawing paintings, playing sports or spending quality time with their loved ones. For instance, when Oxford university conducted a survey on planning of free time activities, it showed 45 percent people prefer planning of their leisure time. In contrast, if people who tend to plan their free time come across hurdles, majority of times it is seen that they end up doing nothing because of inflexibility in their plans. Thus, I think there no point planning free time activities.
On the other hand, many people think and support the idea of not planning anything in leisure time. The simple reason for this is to give some space for our brain to relax, which later act as stimulus to our efficiency when we are working in the office. For example, a study conducted on ninety thousand people, showed that people who were doing nothing had better mental abilities compared with those who were engaged in some acts during their leisure time. Therefore, I personally feel we should not plan anything when its our dwell time.
In conclusion, though prioritizing events in our free time may bring us some satisfaction, these plans mostly do not work out when things go south. Additionally, to enhance our cognitive abilities we should allow our brain to rest for sometime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78153846154 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4474597385 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0431199304 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327966086776 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133917279193 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614000435461 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201783600503 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700095422757 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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