Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in the local community who need it. Others, however, prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion
For sure, there are many people who need any support from others. They could be homeless children, disabled persons, or lonely oldsters. Some of us fill the passion to deter troubles which they could face. One of the ways is a donation to individuals or charity funds. By this essay, I would like to discuss both groups.
Firstly, there is no doubt that we need to help each other to struggle with some difficulties. As far as a problem exists a special organization would be established. It aims to collect as much money as needed helping weak groups of the human race. Though such membership may be treated as a financial pyramid. In that case, the money will disappear. The other bad thing causing distrust to them is that he or she will not receive the support needed.
On the other hand, someone believes that helping somebody from this category is possible only individually. For example, it might be a neighbor who injured due to an accident occurred in the past or old person left by his or her relatives. In that case, our help could be more narrowed, important and useful. Moreover, it seems like not about financial help, but it includes food, apparel, or simply a kind word.
To sum up, all described above, I would conclude that despite different ways how to help those who need it, seems like personal help lessen the risk of waste of money and finds a right address. That is why, in my mind, it is more effective to provide support dedicated to individuals vs charitable organizations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her to struggle with some difficulties. As far as a problem exists a special organ...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial help, but it includes food, apparel, or simply a kind word. To sum up, al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74390243902 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63199061142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9929343694 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6470588235 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186840934065 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051890322829 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499838243799 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111770515078 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479034583412 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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