Some people say that the Internet is bringing people together by making the world smaller.
Do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
Since its invention, the interconnected network has affected the way we communicate, while some people may say that its influence on the way we communicate is largely negative, I dare say that it has made the world a global village.
Firstly, the internet has removed the distance between people and hence lowered the barrier to communication which may arise due to where you live on the globe. For instance, someone living in Australia can talk with someone in Nigeria just with the click of a button via Apps such as Zoom or Skype. Secondly, with the help of live streaming over the network. People cannot only view events in other countries, but they can also participate and be a part of the event, making their contributions and been appreciated for it, in this process, they become a part of those communities. Interactions like this lead to the exchange of cultures and improves the ability of one to be understood. Furthermore, it’s cheaper to communicate over the internet, this tremendously reduces the barrier to communication and makes the world a global village.
The above points notwithstanding, some people believe that there is a downside to exchanging information on the web. They believe that the human touch is lost as most of these forms of conveying information may not always express non-verbal cues such as facial expressions, gesticulations and other body movements. However, despite this misgiving, I will argue that several social media platforms have created some forms of socialization and improved human interactions with Apps such as Tinder and Facebook.
In conclusion, the internet has broken the barrier of distance and has greatly impacted the way we exchange information positively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27240143369 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03882627467 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2760972075 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263559401533 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087114394756 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613557479844 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129153375053 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755329568305 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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