Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Nowadays, the value of money has significantly increased. Money is something through which one can buy any materialistic things. The desire of luxurious things have increased the importance of currency. It is commonly believed by people that happiness of one’s life is connected with money only. On the other hand, there are few people who are not in favour of this.
Firstly, I will discuss how money brings prosperity. A person feel delighted when he gets what he wants. In today’s world, people s preferences have shifted to materialistic things such as huge house, big car and high standard of living etcetera. All these things have created an urge in people to make a lot of money. People have started being socialised with the intent of being showing other people what they own. The reason behind this is it makes them feel good. They feel valued which ultimately bring happiness. Generally, young people remain curious to live with higher standard so in order to get this, they work more and more so that they can earn lot of money.
In the contrast, there are still some people who think that money is not everything. There are some other factors too such as love and care which makes the person feel special. We cannot get these things with money. Things like relationships and loyalty depends on human nature. It is not in any way related to the money. What is more, there comes numerous situations in one’s life which brings pleasure namely child birth, marriage, non-monetary goal achievement.
To recapitulate, money brings joy to some extent. It is not right to say that if money comes the happiness will automatically come. It is just a matter of satisfaction around which the happiness revolve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89726027397 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60863607523 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9941885219 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473394023139 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119031605186 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864798341255 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264373459762 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531326845562 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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