Some people say that modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In recent years, it is seen that technology has evolved drastically affecting our day to day life. One of major change can be observed is the way we get news from. In this essay I will discuss merits and demerits of both.
Before the advancement in the technology people used to read news in a traditional way i.e. from printed newspapers. In that era, they were spending their morning time to read news with a tea or a coffee, which is in my view, the most advantageous as people spending their time for a creative and a meaningful activity. At the same time, one has to spare a sperate time for reading a newspaper which sometimes results in a chaos during rush period. Moreover, one has to wait for the newspaper to arrive at their door step which again cause wastage of time.
Today, many people have chosen to read the news over the internet because almost everyone have their mobile phone available with them along with the internet connection. So, one can easily find the news and read them as per the convenience. Moreover, many of the people are commuting to their work places via different modes of transport and reading news while commuting is the best way to save time and be updated. However, reading news on the internet will not provide the feel which can be achieved through holding a newspaper on a bare hand and reading it. Needless to say, the authenticity of the news found over the internet is not guaranteed and one has to rely on the specific sources only.
To conclude, in spite of the merits of conventional newspaper, the youngsters tend to incline towards the internet news, which will gain popularity day by day while replacing the conventional method of getting news. This maybe the sad loss given their history, unfortunately it is an unavoidable development.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71656050955 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63672919841 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1331592606 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124578024846 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458166714946 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393219871853 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725304153739 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202328919703 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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