Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?
A vast majority hold the opinion that music is a welcome way to connect people from different backgrounds and age groups. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with the former assertion. This essay will first demonstrate that music could help people accept cultural differences, followed by an analysis of how people from all generations could have more opportunities to interact through it.
There is an argument of justification, which can demonstrate the statement, to wit; music enhances helps people to have a better understanding of other cultures. The rationale behind this is that music always reflects traditional and custom of its writer society, therefore, only by watching a performance of a foreign composer, people could broaden their knowledge about various aspects of a different culture stem from history to lifestyle. The Times recently reported that Korea witnessed a dramatic increased in the number of tourists and that most of them want to travel to this country because they are fans of the Korean music industry.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, it is also conceded that claim is anchored on truth because it strengthens bonds between all age groups. A logical justification for this is the fact that people coming from different age groups could have the chance to interact with each other by attending the same concert to listen to their favorite songs or joining the same music club. As mirrored by a case of my friend and her mother, both of them share the same music taste and their most favorite artist is Justin Bieber because his songs are always full of beautiful words about women.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it now can be safely stated that a good way to bring people from different cultures and ages together by allowing them to release negative feelings and broaden their knowledge about different nations.
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Suggestion: opinion
...erent backgrounds and age groups. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with the former ass...
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...e opportunities to interact through it. There is an argument of justification, w...
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...ir knowledge about different nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17532467532 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76181740013 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3939390847 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.4 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308428314945 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123132101227 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761955280433 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19945871198 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718974052481 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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