Some people think that because some children find subjects like mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent you agree?
The issue about whether children must study subjects like mathematics and philosophy or not, is tge one which is open for debate.some people believe that children should study mathematics and philosophy and at the same time, some people think that the dicission is upto the students. However, I aree with the statement that, it is important for students to know about mathematics and philosophy.
Firstly, I believe that studying mathematics and philosophy help the students in building their interest as a whole. Every children should come across the applications of mathematics and philosophy in building their career. Mathematics helps a student to sort out the different types of calculation in their daily life in one way or another. For eg, a student who deal with money or else if he ought to purchase anything from market, then he should be perfect in calculations, so that, he could not be get cheated. This kind of fraudulent activities could not be possible if students are aware of mathematical calculations from the ground root. On the other hand, mathematics help children to select the appropriate career in accordance with their taste. The industries like aviation, engineering, architecture and designing are purely based on mathematical calculations and interpretations.
When it comes to philosophy, it is crucial for students to have an idea about the history of their country and their civilization as well as about the people who fought for their country's freedom. Philosophy on the other hand, teaches the value of life which implies a better way in enhancing the qualities in a student which in fact will build him strong and confident enough to overcome the challenge in life. Philosophy would certainly help a student to chose wise decision in his life. Knowing great philosophers and their contribution towards the economy as well as towards the history might be a good reference for students in knowing their country and culture deeply. Moreover, enormous writings from great philosophers would definitely help a student to perform a deep dive into the history of the their country, which sometimes will help the student in realising how far his country as a whole, has been reached currently when compared with the past.
In conclusion, I think that students must study many subjects including mathematics and philosophy in order to build a good career in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18461538462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9301803029 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0375476426 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158708446974 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631019187888 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617216272488 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126101819643 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711675528565 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.