Some people think cars are the best way to get around a city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Technology has revolutionized all forms of transportation such as cycle, airplane, space shuttle etc. Today, people have multiple options to travel within a city. There are some people who prefer to use a car and other who prefer a cycle. This essay will demonstrate why people prefer one over the other.
Firstly, some people prefer cars over cycles as they provide them the flexibility to travel long distances. For example, although cycles have improved over time, it is impossible to cycle for 30-40 miles every day. Unlike cycles, cars can be used to transport groceries and heavy equipment. Thus, cars can be beneficial to deliver multiple items over longer distances as compared to cycles.
On the other hand, cycles are an inexpensive and eco-friendly means to commute within the city. Whereas, cars are pretty expensive to own and maintain. Cycles are very convenient to ride in the city traffic while cars will take a longer time to navigate. Therefore, cycle is a more environmentally friendly and cheaper alternative to a car.
To summarize, both car and cycle have their benefits to get around the city but, I feel that cars are a better alternative than cycles, as they provide the flexibility to travel over longer distances and help people relocate heavy items. Even though cars causes pollution, modern technological advances have made it possible to run cars on electricity which is not only cheaper than gas but also econ-friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11715481172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80106070489 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5306569996 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215068327141 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078153617335 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621724341139 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133611211386 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459312582767 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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