The lifestyle of individuals living in cities can be drastically different from those living in the rural areas. While some say that it is important to live in a place that is easily accessible, some say that the quality of life in a remote place is better. In this essay outlines the positive and the negative aspects of living in a city rather than the village.
Undoubtedly, the infrastructure in the cities make it easily accessible to some of the fundamental services such as a health care facilities, transportation, and educational institutions. It is easier to avail a medical treatment for any domestic accidents at home in a city compared to a village. In addition, the cosmopolitan culture in the cities promote a more diverse and inclusive communities. People from diverse cultural, language, and regional back grounds live harmoniously as a community.
However, in a countryside, there is a better quality of life. Considering that agriculture is the primary occupation of the people in villages the environment is not polluted and unadulterated. Because of their lifestyle, people living in villages lead a healthy and stress free life. The luxury of time encourages people to indulge in a lot of community initiates and builds a strong relationship.
In conclusion, although there are many advantages to living in a city, the lifestyle does have an impact on the health of individuals. The government must take adequate measures to provide employment opportunities by encouraging small scale cottage industries in village to ensure people don not migrate to cities. It is also imperative that all the primary facilities are accessible to everyone irrespective of the place they live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22181818182 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23855696872 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1396823829 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415813714643 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121150313433 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868799510156 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227761927603 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106445493911 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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