Some people think that computers and the internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Computer, Internet, school and teachers plays an important part in every child's life for their education and learning. Some people view exposure to technologies are beneficial for child's education, I believe children learns more efficiently at schools with teachers.
On one hand, there are several advantages of technologies like computer and internet on child's education. Children are exposed to varieties of languages and crafts, which helps them to develop the skills like communication in different languages as well as motor skills through origami technique. Evidence also supports that child learns and adapts to more things between an age of 2 to 5 years. Furthermore, this technological advancement helps them in future also when they grow to an adult and finds job.
On the other hand, schools and teachers teaches child skills like co-operation and competition, the skill sets cannot be learnt through technology. Co-operation is very much essential to lie in this world, specially for daily needs as well as to live in the society. Also, competitive attitude is required by every child to become better and to survive when they grow old. For example, if playing for a team, co-operativeness is required within a team, while there is competition with other team, which is only learnt at school. Moreover, teachers helps in correcting the mistakes that technology cannot provide, with keeping in mind, every student would need different ways to rectify their mistake.
To conclude, although technology develops few skillsets, in my opinion school and importance of teachers in child's development cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40784313725 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91231855827 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0233037944 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294491798203 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107822197662 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970649528538 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197678132413 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131763391171 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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