Some people think that famous people can help international aid organizations to draw attention to important problems. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The role of famous people in raising public awareness has been a matter of great controversy to both individuals and societies. While it is argued that the famous people can make important problems become less serious, I believe that well-known people can help global aid organizations to attract much attention of the community.
On the one hand, many people consider that celebrities’ involvement can downplay the significance of problems. In an effort to attract the attention of society, a number of important people try to be involved in as many voluntary projects as possible without any real actions. As a result, this can devalue those projects’ problems. Secondly, once famous people’s image is damaged, the meaning and original purpose of aid programs will be no longer convincing. For example, a well-known person joins the campaign against using drugs, but he is caught using them in public places. For this reason, the purpose of this campaign is totally meaningless.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that it is more beneficial to famous person take part in aid programs. Firstly, they have a huge number of fans who are inspired by their actions. For example, when My Tam - a Vietnamese famous singer- took part in building schools for less fortunate children, thousands of youngsters from their fan clubs joined in this project by donating money and working as volunteers thanks to their encouragement. Secondly, celebrities can communicate and deliver information about big problems to a large audience around the world. For example, by taking part in the Ice Bucket Challenge in 2014, various celebrities such as Bill Gates, Emma Watson have helped the ALS organization to let millions of people know about a disease called ALS.
In conclusion, many people think that celebrities likely to make these problems become less crucial, it seems to me that well-known people have affected greatly in raising public awareness of community through aid programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25078369906 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93689987221 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4410133452 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346331560064 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11184137054 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106708373081 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229340503984 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996868555837 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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