Some people think that it is best to encourage children to leave their family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at the family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Although in opinion of many it is argued that children's should leave their parents house at an early age, while some believe children's should live with their parents till they want. In my opinion, I strongly believe children's should be under parents guidance up to a certain age for certain reasons.
Firstly, I agree with those believing in keeping young ones with the respective families till they reach a matured state. Moreover, kids at an early age do not have decision making strategy. They might get driven away easily by making wrong choices. Having said that, parents prove to be a shelter for the growing kids. Families support and nurturing is highly recommended for youngsters to build a strong future. Thus, a comfortable life can be provided by staying with parents to the kids where there physical and mental growth is always better.
On the other hand, some argue for allowing children's to leave parents home at an early age. There are ample of reasons to support their point. Firstly, living alone can make youngsters independent. They learn to understand things in a better ways as they do not have any support for them. Secondly, kids can become brave and face any unwanted situation calmly believing they are the one's to handle everything from start till end. Lastly, they understand the importance of money and salary which makes them more competent to survive in the harsh world.
Though the supporters of allowing children's to leave the families have strong justifications, I believe kids should be allowed freedom with some kind of basic guidance and eye check from parents on their doings. At a matured age, children's can better decide their future and needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01766784452 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44739380122 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7393492912 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267603563224 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859231626505 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776840760518 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180813582127 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539059310036 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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