Some people think it is a good thing for a senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree?
There is a global trend nowadays where salary structure varies across positions within organizations. The higher the roles and responsibility the higher the scale of salary and vice-versa. I find the argument contentious where a vast section of people believe that senior management should have a higher salary as compared to the other staff in a company. I completely agree with this argument and will elucidate on it with relevant examples.
Firstly most of the corporates follow a top-down approach where the senior positions like chief operating officer, Chief Technical offers and the business heads are paid exorbitant wages in comparison to other workers as these people are the brain of the company in closing more business transactions additionally they play vital role in defining the vision and constantly motivate the staff to achieve better results. The management also leads their specific teams by providing them instructions in completing tasks. As can be seen in the past from visionary leaders like Bill Gates, Steve Jobs who were heading giants like Microsoft and Apple respectively were paid exorbitant salaries due to the fact that they made immense contributions to enabling these companies to become global leaders.
Similarly, on the other hand,<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="Similarly "></span> the lower staff is meant to follow the guidelines and the process already set out by the management. For instance, in a business unit, the product managers follow a process already in place setting out the product head. The product headsets out the key performance Indicators and the goals to be achieved by the staff.
Hence, in my opinion, it is evident that the management staff of the company plays a critical role in the setting the goals and guidelines for the staff necessary for the growth and survival of the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...eaders. Similarly, on the other hand, ^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37627118644 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.375774247 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7231708507 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.181818182 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169927262295 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603379877297 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538949435691 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980465901194 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467774705249 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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