Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind ,such as reading and doing work puzzles .Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
No doubt,reading and puzzle working activities are utmost good in free time for increasing the consideration of mind and the pivotal role is played by these activities for utilizing a leisure time in particular field but some people think that the relaxation is very significant for mind during spare time.This essay will analyze both the view points of given statement in following paragraphs along with opinion.
To Begin with,reading has a huge positive impact on mind because the reading books as well as newspaper helps the person to enhance a knowledge world widely and the theoretical skills can be easily increased due to reading in the field of study with the help of useful ideas.However,it helps to sharp the mind of person with new creations and makes the person enable to understand everything very deeply.
On the flip side,after a long time work duration ,the rest is very mandatory for mind for being comfortable during a leisure time because it helps the person to fresh a mind and regain energy. Moreover,playing sports in spare time also keeps the person physically fit and protect from various kind of diseases as well as spending time to relax and enjoy is important to balance the mind properly.
In the nutshell,it can be clearly notified that the rest is must important in leisure time because it is the best method to reduce the burden from mind and to maintain a good health so that’s why people should give much more priority to rest rather than reading.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in particular, kind of, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76951150991 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9720792731 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 248.4 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401530765407 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215500392933 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100640586566 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236760722973 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105981463587 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.0946893788 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.