Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people,While others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Dis cuss both views and give your own opinion.
Museum serves as a place that helps in learning more about historic and sculpture. Many people think that museum should teach, while other believe that it should attract. In my opinion, I think museum should serve both functions.
Almost everyone get attracted to musical and lively environment. Thus museum should provide extra musical and lighting effect of the historic monuments that will attract its visitors. It is more easier to learn more about past customs by giving a special description and drama that entertained the visitors. In additional, it should provide different ways of expressing images. Museum should have interactive activities such as games as part of its exhibitions. It will be a best past time.
On the other hand, It is argued that museum should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to impact knowledge that vistors is not previously priveledge to know. Its should also help in learning about ancient, culture and customs. Scientist and students are able to research on historical antiques and culture. For Instance, Student find it more interesting by observing the ancient item rather than reading them in books. Also people who are involved in numismatics can easily collect more information about the coin from the museum.
In conclusion, It seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18595041322 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70444048941 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1061017903 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282638974576 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893924333046 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876371797369 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185751702807 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947748356874 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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