Some people think the news has no real connection to people’s lives, so reading newspapers or watching news programmes on television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that talk shows and print media is useless as it has no relation with our life. Although some might agree with this statement, but I completely disagree with this notion. Not only because the news is a good source of information and awareness but also because it can influence a society in several ways. This essay will explore the factors to justify my opinion.
Firstly, the fact that compelled me to disagree with this statement is that the news is a very good source of information either in form of paper media or television shows. As we can get knowledge of different aspects in our society and around the globe as well. Take an example of a survey conducted by the New York Times in the United States of America, according to the survey people expressed that news magazine and news broadcasted on television help them stay informed with the world. Thus, news is an important factor in our life which makes us feel connected with others.
Secondly, television programs and newspapers are very good ways to generate awareness in society. As it is a human behavior that things we read or watch can have a lasting effect on our memory. For Instance, the French government uses print media and news shows to teach people about the adverse effects of drugs. Hence, news can be useful in educating people about any social issue prevailing in a community.
Finally, watching television and reading newspapers can also be motivational in terms of new fashion trends or any new achievement made by somebody. As people appearing in news magazines and television programs are public figures and can be influential.
To sum up, I believe that I totally disagree with this statement. Not only because news are informative source and can be used to identify problems in our society but also because it can be motivational in several ways.
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- In the past people wore clothes that were unique to their own culture Today people all over the world wear the same types of clothes Is this trend a positive or negative development 56
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realize you had left your wallet there write a letter to your friend In your letter thank you friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instr 56
- Some people think that school children should be asked to work individually in class Others believe that working in small groups is better Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84326018809 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6413072083 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523510971787 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7864735889 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239001595935 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077610677182 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509635152623 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136499754967 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054886510034 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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