Some people think that not only should professional sports and cultural enterprises be sponsored by the government but also that amateur adult and children groups should get funding. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Athletes and cultural organizations who are the face of the county get funded by the government for their work, while others believe that youngster who plays for his pleasure rather than for financial benefit should also get paid by the country. I agree with this opinion because the person who plays sports or performs any cultural activities in the school without having proper training and knowledge, and if the government sponsors them, they will become our future generation who represent our country at international level.
To embark upon, some people who play sports for his pleasure instead earning money from the game. Firstly, if the cricket board will sponsor funding to those people who play sports for the sake of fun proper training, they will get the training from the well know coaches which helps them to do better in games. Besides, this builds confidence in that person’s, and they will play the game seriously, which has a positive impact on our future team. For example, in 2019, Indian cricket Association board sponsor coaching and training to students who play good in college in the topmost cricket academy.
On the other hand, different age groups in school do cultural activities. they should get some budget for their international trips to represent our traditional values in various foreign colleges. this way, other nations will get to know about our cultural values, which indirectly increase tourism and has a positive impact on our economy. A recent article published in the Time magazine that the government is ready to bear the expenses of children groups to represent our cultural values in international schools.
To sum up, the government should allocate some budget to people who play sports for his fun, and to those toddlers who represent our cultural values in different international college for the future face of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15309446254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60508946168 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501628664495 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5457902502 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.818181818 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168627490886 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076593460055 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037924274939 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11968230813 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262000639396 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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