Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Even in this evolving era of technology, most people believe that spending more time on electronic devices is the first thing that should be avoided in a kid’s day-to-day life. And I also agree that in many ways, Outdoor games or exercise helps in children’s holistic development than just sitting and playing games on devices or the internet.
In the last few years, many hi-tech gaming advancements took place and that has made the young generation habituated to the advanced graphical gaming experience. Moreover, smooth and fast internet has provided a better experience with such online computer games. In these situations, no wonder why kids have nothing but the games to talk about. Additionally in young age, human eyes are more sensitive than later age, which can easily get hurt by harmful blue rays of mobiles and computers. Which leads them to be physically weak, mentally distracted, and with possession of no useful knowledge.
On the other hand, any outdoor sports or exercise helps to build and maintain physical and mental health. “One hour a day of sport adds years in your life”. While playing, Not only One needs to be physically fit but also to develop playing strategies in no-time to win. For instance, while playing a cricket match, every ball bowled is new for a batsman and he has to strategize to play quickly and tackle it the best way possible. And the same way, a bowler needs to plan each bowl to be tough for a batsman to play. This way a sense of competition and sportsmen spirit can be infused in youngers that will eventually help them to handle a tough time in real life as well.
In conclusion, if we see the bigger picture, benefits of outdoor activities are way ahead of the “good experience of graphical games” for an overall 360 development of a kid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82958199357 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63138049607 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633440514469 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1637717848 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211695089557 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635640832631 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658309051131 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129995960486 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486607067096 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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