Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children's freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a controversial issue about the level of independence parents should give their children. Some teachers argue that young people should have more autonomy, while some social workers believe that parents should restrict them as much as possible. This essay will discuss both points of view and agrees with the idea of autonomy to children.
Let us start with the reasons why some teachers suggest parents to grant their children more opportunities to make decisions themselves. The first reason is that they quickly become mature. Children, who are more independent of their parents, tend to learn soft skills faster than those are constantly under parental supervision. Another reasons is that they find lifelong hobbies. The youth, who are less dependent on their parents, normally find more permanent interests in life, that influence their choices in future, such as career and spare time activities. Furthermore, parents have more time for themselves. Having fewer parental responsibilities allows parents to spend more time on other things, including building relationship with one another and losing weight.
However, some social workers claim that children should be under a thorough supervision of their parents. Firstly, they may develop bad habits. Having more freedom from parents may cause immature minds to take unhealthy habits, for example, smoking and drug addiction. Secondly, they may make friends with unwanted peers. Many adolescents tend to join some criminal groups, if they are unrestricted by their relatives in choice of acquaintances. Moreover, they may fall victim. In society, children may become involved in sexual harassment, unless their parents pay strict attention to the people around their children.
In conclusion, even though some social workers think that parents should control what their children do on the maximum, I think that it is better for them to receive more freedom from parental control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4950166113 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65430416974 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4275852885 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401060659216 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117950246129 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104436212726 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272778021223 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077015279786 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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