Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children's freedom.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wither to give children complete freedom of choice on daily matters or not. Has been a topic of controversy among people, some believe that allowing too much freedom will create selfish individuals. While others disagree with that and believe that freedom is necessary to create creative and self- confident individuals. I personally believe that parents should not give absolute freedom nor restrain them in every day matters there must be a balance.
To begin with, children who are permitted to do what every they want on a daily basses will grow up to be selfish and self-centered individuals , according to recant study conducted in the united kingdom , childhood experiences have permanent effect on someone personality and thinking pattern ,therefor parents should make important decisions for their offspring and deter them from doing things that will effect they future in negative way.
On the other hand , some kind of freedom is must for youngster to have adult who are creative and confident,if parent do not allow they children to pick up certain things will grow up to be fragile and lack confident .
To sum , it is important for children to have some freedom of choices in order to be adult with their own opinion and creative thoughts, however absolute freedom will have a harmful impact on childe bringing up which later will affect their adult personality
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61479323803 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.741333781 49.4020404114 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.0 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318585898342 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148275739095 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643043676195 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174423180129 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521264136236 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.