Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The development of young generation is significant for our better future. Some people think that parents are responsible to instigate good behaviors and moral values, while others maintain that it is the responsibility of schools. I believe that role of both parents and school is crucial in this respect.
To begin with, role of parents is imperative for the upbringing of their young children. The obvious reason is that learning of child begins at home and parents are the first mentor of child. Young children follow their parent‘s footstep and instructions more than anyone else. They idealize them like trail blazers wanted to be like them. In addition to it, good things learnt in early childhood attribute to personality and character of person. For example, at early age parents set few rules for a child which if obeyed properly, will become part of his identity. Hence, whatever the qualities a child nurture from their parents has long-lasting impression.
On the contrary, school role is considerable to teach moral and social lessons. School is place where a person spent a significant part of his life and therefore, it profoundly affects the child’s development. The individual gets opportunity to learn from wide community of peers and teachers. Moreover, it offers a place to practice different personality and social traits by having interaction with others from different background. For instance, children learned to be disciplined and cooperative at school.
In conclusion, I believe that both parents and school should educate the young generation to be active and able member of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...parents set few rules for a child which if obeyed properly, will become part of hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32945736434 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92109491545 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1183027446 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25758508985 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812082374406 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769042628318 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178596278934 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704176728173 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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