Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
It is believed that raising plenary children is the parents’ responsibility. On the other hand, it is said to be the school's duty. In my opinion, both factors should join hands to make them ideal citizens of the community
Firstly, babies and toddlers are mostly being taken care of by their moms and dads
The first step of ensuring children to be a good members of society is to set an example to inspire infants. At a young age, toddlers tend to be influenced by parents' behavior, as an outcome, kids will behave in a certain manner. Secondly, as is observed that offspring can acquire knowledge easier than grownups without knowing what is adequate or reprehensible. That is why parental guidance is necessary for children development.
On the other hand, the educational system in schools is highly reliable, therefore, shaping each individual into a modest shape is the academies' responsibility. In school, there is a tendency of discipline happening around the learning environment, in that way students will try hard to follow the rules and meet the expectation of several teachers. To make oneself a better human in society, it must take hard work and years of dedication. Because of being experienced in this field, educators will do a marvelous job in teaching the kids,
In conclusion, It is necessary for building children to be good members of society with the help of multiple educational systems and wellsprings.
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- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give you own opinion 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...On the other hand, it is said to be the schools duty. In my opinion, both factors shoul...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
... step of ensuring children to be a good members of society is to set an example to insp...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'academies'' or 'academy's'?
Suggestion: academies'; academy's
...h individual into a modest shape is the academies responsibility. In school, there is a t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03781512605 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97114682207 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.608423431 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245780763762 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08437157164 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615559443186 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120984403644 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057945075903 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.