Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether mental strength plays a more significant role to win any sports or physical strength is more important. While both are equally important to be victorious in any game, however; in this essay I will discuss both the views and then conclude by giving my opinion.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of logical reasons that prove that mental stamina of a player to react to a difficult situation is what differentiates them from any ordinary player. Firstly, the effects of positive thinking are much more important than physical strength. Moreover, mental strength determines that whether the player will be able to overcome the stress associated with playing on a bigger level. For example, the performance of wrestler Mary Kom was below average when she heard the news of her baby's deteriorating health which again proves that mental strength is much more important than physical strength.
On the contrary, some people believe that most games require players to be physically fit to beat other players who will have an advantage if the player of the team is physically weak. Every sport has a compulsory physical fitness session on a daily basis to train the players to outperform their opponents. For instance, a wrestler who is mentally strong but physically weak might end up enduring severe fatal injuries in any boxing match.
In conclusion, I believe that mental and physical strength are two sides of the same coin. A player is definitely going to lose the match if he is lacking either of the two. However, I believe that mental strength is far more important as what we think we become. If a player decides to win and has a positive mindset then he can not only attain physical strength but also the right attitude which is the most important trait for any triumph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92258064516 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62414150275 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6866303259 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38163848547 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134277295599 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879179092184 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229572416476 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698748448331 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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