Some people think that school do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their helath. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some people who assert that educational institutes these days do not teach kids how to keep themselves healthy. I personally disagree with the given statement as the schools focus on the holistic development of children which involves maintaining a balance between grades and a healthy lifestyle.
The alma matters make efforts to develop a healthy lifestyle among students. In most of the schools, Health Education is included as part of the curriculum as it plays an indispensable part in maintaining proper health standards among students. To shed more light on that, during their initial age, when they learn things quickly, students are taught to develop the habit of having a healthy lifestyle. The youngsters are inspired to go for a morning walk, take participate in games, maintain proper hygiene which is not only fruitful for them but for their surroundings as well.
The other effort taken by school these days is to create awareness among students about developing healthy eating habits to avoid the ubiquitous issue of Obesity faced by learners these days. The majority of schools have hired Nutritionists, who prepare diet charts for kids, and the parents are being informed as well so that they can also take care of that. At their initial age, kids are instructed to eat healthy food and avoid junk food. This activity demonstrates that schools are actively becoming attentive to improve the health standards of their scholars because if they are healthy then they will be able to concentrate on their studies.
To sum up, what have discussed so far is that educational institutes are paying attention towards youngsters by developing healthy habits and not just focusing to get more grades and avoiding them to participate in the rat race of gaining the highest grades and focusing on their well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71132603884 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7703798918 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115794621541 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452747446619 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646843608467 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795115193027 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729748884134 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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