Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that during old days one can only collect the cherished memories of a young age. The teenage days are enjoyed in education, whereas adult finds happiness in their work life. Both teenage and adult lives are discussed in the below paragraphs.
During teenage days, most of the schedule is either spent in college or high schools. The only essential responsibilities are to attend lectures and get the best outcome in the exam. With less financial obligation, after classes, one can find enough time to go out with friends for movies, lunch, dinner, playing games, etc. Moreover, the vacation after schools is much more extended than work-life, so there is ample time to do whatever he wants to do.
On the other hand, adults are mostly occupied at the office, with fixed working hours, it is difficult to manage the time for outings. Many of them love doing their job, and there are parties organised after office hours to cheer themselves. Apart from that, there are business trips organised, which are more lavish and rich in nature. As one is earning, the monetary issues are less, interestingly, one can plan and save for the yearly trips. Other than that, having a beautiful family is also a part of happiness.
In my opinion, teenagers are with a lot of energy and time, but there is a limitation in financial spendings as they are not earning. Although adults are making money and have energy, time does not suffice. Both the life-times are different and are enjoyed in their own unique ways.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-01-24 | ielts_tony | 61 | view |
| 2022-02-05 | lakhveer khokhar | 73 | view |
| 2021-08-30 | pourya | 67 | view |
| 2021-08-30 | pourya | 78 | view |
| 2021-08-27 | SKN | 73 | view |
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 78
- Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies such as computers and smartphones is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course Write a letter to the college Principal In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do 78
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed What is the reason for doing this Is this a negative or positive development 63
- You have a full time job and you are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49922405421 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.781972631 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190375448014 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641428941211 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561998134389 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11717725802 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341329161574 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.