Some people think that the teenager years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most individuals have various opinion about what time do they feel happy. While some people believe that teenager is the most cheerful period that they was experienced, I side with those who agree that we can find out what is hapiness during adult life.
To begin with, there are several reason why teenager is the happiest times, and one of them is explore many opportunities. It is the period which we can explore and try anything news without scaring make mistake and the judgement of anyone so that they can regret about anything they didn’t do after they grow up. For instance, according to the recent studies, eight of ten adults over 50 years ago said that they were much happier when they were between 12-17 years old. Moreover, youngsters seem to have a low level of both pressure and responsibility at this time so it can contribute to more delightful moments and happiest times. Many of hardship barely touch to them and they have big dreams in life which make them happier than most adults.
However, being an adults can bring a happy life for them rely on several reasons, and one of them is the dependent of economy. It create a power to decide what they do with their life, which means that adults can do anything they want without borrrow money from their parent. For instance, some America adults are able to retired in the age of 30 to 40 with the high number of net worth. Moreover, Responsibilities often come with great pleasure which leads to a more fulfilling and happy adult life. Paying for children’s tuition fees, buying them gifts, taking the family to a dream holiday destination, paying bills and helping others bring immeasurable joys in life.
To conclude, although some people agree with the views is that childhood always a happy stage of them, others individual believe that adults life can bring a high level of fulfilment. However, I strongly believe that most adults had to feel satisfy with our currentlife despite missing anything on the childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explored'.
Suggestion: explored
... the happiest times, and one of them is explore many opportunities. It is the period wh...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...pier than most adults. However, being an adults can bring a happy life for them rely on...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...of them is the dependent of economy. It create a power to decide what they do with the...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the high number of net worth. Moreover, Responsibilities often come with great p...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...of them, others individual believe that adults life can bring a high level of fulfilme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82028985507 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46470570395 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7208004892 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211904096695 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805321060485 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535635572966 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142937333243 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314870606403 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.