Some people think that wild animal should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are two difference opinion people shared about Wildlife, one side is in contradiction of having zoos to keep those animals while other supports and believe that the zoos are necessity for wild animals' protection. In my opinion, wild animals should be set free in jungle, without any restrictions, if needed, we should promote wild safaris so people and animal both can enjoy wildness.
There are many social activates who fights to close zoo type of organizations, as per those people every living organism have rights to live freely and keeping locked those animals in zoo is thread to their freedom. Menageries catch such wild animals against their will. They failed to keep the area sanitized and does not provide proper food. Some animals are habituated to live in different environment, such as Polar bears can live only in cold weather, however, zoos keep them in worm area for self-profit. Although, there are many drawbacks having zoos, we should also consider the other vision. Zoos take care of wild creatures and protect them form hunters. We can say, due to zoo, some of animals are still exist. Our kids can get familiar with such wildlife and learn about them. Animals also feel safe, and forests are getting smaller due to heavy tree cutting.
I always feel that Animals or human, they should stay near home, and Jungle is home for wildlife. They should be kept in forest only. We should indorse the maze tours this will raise the funds so government can take care of wildlife and its essential subparts.
With this, I would like to say, though there are two versatile views about zoo, we should think promoting wild trips and travels instead of hosting animals in the cage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...ve that the zoos are necessity for wild animals protection. In my opinion, wild animals...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun social seems to be countable; consider using: 'many socials'.
Suggestion: many socials
... both can enjoy wildness. There are many social activates who fights to close zoo type ...
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...m form hunters. We can say, due to zoo, some of animals are still exist. Our kids can get famil...
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Line 3, column 716, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
..., due to zoo, some of animals are still exist. Our kids can get familiar with such wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88620689655 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32481572026 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7501678485 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355149824777 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112279657459 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827718623542 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21745364708 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951600304944 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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