Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
it is argued that zoos should be shut down as they’re cruel while others feel zoos have a role to play in conserving wild species. this essay will argue that despite zoos helping with the preservation of certain animals, they are taking away the freedom most animals would enjoy if they were in their natural habitat and hence should not be allowed to operate.
human activities like deforestation and industrialisation have damaged the ecosystem and threatened the survival of many animals. moreover, poaching is another activity that is pushing some animals to the brink of extinction. such animals have been shifted to zoos where special care is given to them to ensure they can thrive. Attempts have been made to try and replicate the natural habitat so that the animals feel at home. For example, many Bengal tigers have been relocated to “safe” environments in zoos due to the growing threat to their survival in the wild.
Protecting animals doesn’t necessarily mean putting them in a cage for the amusement of people and animal activists around the world vehemently disapprove of this practice . they feel that it is inherently cruel that an animal has to be taken away from its natural habitat and kept in a cage just for humans to look at. moreover, these animals are deprived of the freedom that animals in the wild enjoy like moving around freely and in the case of predators, hunt for their prey. To illustrate, lions in zoos usually look bored and don’t radiate the pride and majestic demeanor that you would associate with lions found in the wild.
To conclude, while zoos are important for the conservation of endangered species, it takes these animals away from their natural surroundings which could affect the well being of such animals in the long run. it is my opinion that zoos should cease to operate in its current form as animals shouldn’t be put in cages in the name of conservation and human entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97575757576 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62880505247 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6395878793 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2638141235 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960386021666 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679861722093 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168236442011 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050834649526 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.