Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree.
The relevance of books in this age of computers is up for debate. The convenience and ease with which unlimited amounts of information can be accessed over the internet has led some people to feel that books have lost their utility nowadays. I strongly concur with this group of people as I feel there are many other alternatives to books which offer a more pleasurable, if not the same, level of reading experience and more current information.
Books have long been the traditional way of disbursing knowledge and entertainment. Before the advent of the Internet, books were the only way of transmitting information. The majority of the schools still use books to teach children and very few schools have actually transitioned to online mode of education in a limited way. Books still are essential but its importance is being eroded due to the availability of the same content as e-books.
Majority of the people are turning to e-reading. They like the convenience this offers as they have a wide array of content available at their fingertips and sometimes at a much discounted price than they would have had to pay if they were to purchase a book at a store. Moreover, they don’t need to find space in their homes to store the books as everything is saved online. Online stores like Amazon offer a vast selection of fiction and non-fiction content for its subscribers. Thus, e-books are becoming the preferred mode of reading for most people.
To conclude, the argument that books are losing its importance in the current era where everything is available online has its merit. I strongly feel the replacement of books with their online version is imminent though we would still find that some areas like schools may still choose to conduct their teaching through books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a limited way" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ransitioned to online mode of education in a limited way. Books still are essential but its impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03112840467 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73602563458 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3412860514 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119311497623 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490176362812 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273846654734 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076616050958 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221167688786 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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