Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends. Others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that gifts are an ideal way to express our caring and loving for beloved ones, while others believe some other viable options exist to do the same. Despite the fact that presents constantly remind recipient about one's affection and affinity, I believe shoring up and offering emotional support in attached people's difficult times is much more important than any materialistic token.
On the one hand, it is thought that presents strengthen the relationship bond between people as while using those things in day-to-day life people recall givers' care and gratitude for themselves. This constant reminding bring people more close to each other and thus, they enjoy long-lasting congruous relationships which is essential to live happy life. For example, a mobile phone gift to loved ones will not only help them in their daily life but also remind them presenter's love for them, fostering mutual relationship. However,I believe sometimes people are not in a position to give gifts to others because of financial constraints, therefore, this cannot be the only crucial way to show our appreciation and care. In certain situations only kind concerning words and emotional regards do the needful.
On the other hand, a different school of thought believes other important methods such as, backing people in their adversities, giving emotional support, showing compassion and concerns just by exchanging few words sometimes do the trick that outweighs any expensive gift. They think in many occasions people not necessarily want any consumer goods, which perhaps they are capable of purchasing on their own, but a person to share feelings and a moral support to thrive hostile life circumstances. Take for example old parents and grandparents, who do not seek any materialistic token of love, but expect a few minutes' casual talk from their children to express out their old age worries. This viewpoint seems more prudent and practical, eclipsing previous one.
In conclusion, taking both above mentioned views into account I would like to conclude that although many consider giving gifts as a wise approach to show care and warmth to others because it provides necessary strength to their rapports, I feel there are other important things such as rendering emotional support and compassion in their gloomy days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29110512129 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7112419597 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609164420485 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1311979813 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.583333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9166666667 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251623049061 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865203313138 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749138308799 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159598322308 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417157915979 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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