Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day. Do you agree or Disagree?
Stress is one of the most common health issues which many people are suffering these days. Evidently, this contributes to an abundance of mental and physical problems. It is considered by some psychologists that having an idle time per day could help to ease this and hence they recommend that. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement.
Admittedly, the majority of people are suffering from a certain degree of stress due to their work. Not only adults but also children are victims of this. Firstly, if we consider adults, reasons for their stress could be uncertain financial situations whereas for children it could be the fear of the future. Secondly, current social and political trends are making people worry about their life and consequently, making them more stressful. Moreover, despite doctors advice, many people keep doing the same jobs and living goal-oriented restless life. As a result, ultimately, a number of them are ending up with miserable unhealthy life.
To mitigate this, as psychologists recommend, taking an off-time every day could be exceedingly helpful. Because by doing nothing, both our mind and body could get a perfect rest. In fact, when we are doing nothing our body getting started to heal itself. Also, we should take into account that quiet and calm mind is one of the best medicine to cure a plethora of diseases like depression, high blood pressure, and many other terminal diseases. Furthermore, when we do nothing means we are not worrying about anything about life, which gives ample time to stay in the present moment and enjoy life as it is. Numerous research has been conducted on these areas and it is a proven fact that people need to spend a certain amount of work-free time to get maximum health benefits.
In conclusion, fear of future and uncertain situations make people unnecessarily stressed. Having an idle time every day could help to relax and heal our body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, as for, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01857585139 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62846656232 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.499648381 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243023711654 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647202201577 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554703147929 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126297070477 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638890976045 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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